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Immigration版 - 请大家评评这NOID response的总结
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XM359就是一Asshole两步判定法已经生效了
求助!TSC EB1A+PP NOIDI140 approved after NOID by IO0106
令人堵心的正月十五:EB1A non-pp TSC NOID 求助继续关于TX211(director in TX)的NOID
EB-1A no PP 8 个半月,今天收到RFE5月初交的EB1a,有消息了,需要RFE
大家幫看看這麼回復 RFE 行麼Notice of intent to deny
can I claim leading role?Eb1A 140 NOID from TSC OI 144 大家帮忙看看啊,谢谢
DIY EB1A NOIDeb1a approved experience
EB1A PP TSC NOID by 359请问以前国内普刊上的水文章对于EB1能支持多少?
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d*****w
发帖数: 281
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Dr. xxx’s position at the top of the field of developmental biology is thus
confirmed by his service on an editorial board; the citation of his
research at extremely high rates by other scientists in his field; the
regular inclusion of his research in review articles identifying the most
important progress in the field; the substantial attention received by his
research from other experts in his discipline; the myriad ways that other
independent scientists have found his work to be extremely significant to
their own studies; and the value of his contributions to ongoing research
programs funded by the National Institutes of Health. Since Dr. xxx’s
research has been thus implemented, and his results have garnered such
attention over the course of several years, it is clear that Dr. xxx has
achieved sustained acclaim. Dr. xxx’s level of acclaim in his field
exemplifies his extraordinary ability in the field of developmental biology.
NOID response 单倍行距,12页。针对以上各点都有实例和详尽讨论。感觉自己和律师
都已经
尽力了,能挖的亮点都挖到了。
a**********u
发帖数: 28450
2
我就提一点建议,论述的时候千万注意必须是已经取得的(already done),而不是
potential和will之类的.比如“the myriad ways that other
independent scientists have found his work to be extremely significant to
their own studies”还不如写成他们的发现或者重大成就是基于你的工作。

thus

【在 d*****w 的大作中提到】
: Dr. xxx’s position at the top of the field of developmental biology is thus
: confirmed by his service on an editorial board; the citation of his
: research at extremely high rates by other scientists in his field; the
: regular inclusion of his research in review articles identifying the most
: important progress in the field; the substantial attention received by his
: research from other experts in his discipline; the myriad ways that other
: independent scientists have found his work to be extremely significant to
: their own studies; and the value of his contributions to ongoing research
: programs funded by the National Institutes of Health. Since Dr. xxx’s
: research has been thus implemented, and his results have garnered such

d*****w
发帖数: 281
3

谢谢!
这段论述主要是基于我的实验结果帮助老板从NIH搞到了2M. NIH给了钱,但是还没有出
文章,所以只能这么说了。

【在 a**********u 的大作中提到】
: 我就提一点建议,论述的时候千万注意必须是已经取得的(already done),而不是
: potential和will之类的.比如“the myriad ways that other
: independent scientists have found his work to be extremely significant to
: their own studies”还不如写成他们的发现或者重大成就是基于你的工作。
:
: thus

c******3
发帖数: 6509
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总结不都是套话,还需要特别设计?
前面的objective evidence才是关键
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请问以前国内普刊上的水文章对于EB1能支持多少?大家幫看看這麼回復 RFE 行麼
NOID发出,等待与XM100巅峰对决can I claim leading role?
NOID Response 要点总结DIY EB1A NOID
[合集] 继续关于TX211(director in TX)的NOIDEB1A PP TSC NOID by 359
XM359就是一Asshole两步判定法已经生效了
求助!TSC EB1A+PP NOIDI140 approved after NOID by IO0106
令人堵心的正月十五:EB1A non-pp TSC NOID 求助继续关于TX211(director in TX)的NOID
EB-1A no PP 8 个半月,今天收到RFE5月初交的EB1a,有消息了,需要RFE
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