C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 Comment 俱乐部 】
发信人: CornucopiaX (小土豆), 信区: Comment
标 题: HOW IS MY English SENT: What is the effect.?
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jul 6 14:40:26 2017, 美东)
Hey xxx,
This is the first time I want to fight for my human right. I went to
internet and found my district Representative and that is you. I need your
help. I wish you can patiently read my story.
My Goal for this email is get the permanent residence right so that I can
feel safe in America. I am ready to go back to China. My children will bring
my ashes to XXX Memorial Park, Lot 22. I am confident that I am a valuable
asset to America. I have already brought the strongest ethic to this country
and made my neighborhood better. If you really want to know my credentials,
please contact me and I can sent you a list. I don't need your sympathy. I
need your HELP because that is part of your job.
I believe integrity and honest means a lot to American value. I believe I
have made the right decision to choose America as my children's country.
Please help me to ask Immigration officials to approve my green card.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Thank you.
Best regards.
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 2 Your english is bad
No green card for you.
bring
valuable
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : 【 以下文字转载自 Comment 俱乐部 】 : 发信人: CornucopiaX (小土豆), 信区: Comment : 标 题: HOW IS MY English SENT: What is the effect.? : 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Thu Jul 6 14:40:26 2017, 美东) : Hey xxx, : This is the first time I want to fight for my human right. I went to : internet and found my district Representative and that is you. I need your : help. I wish you can patiently read my story. : My Goal for this email is get the permanent residence right so that I can : feel safe in America. I am ready to go back to China. My children will bring
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 3 seriously, this was written minutes ago.
That is my English...I proof reading one time then sent.
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : Your english is bad : No green card for you. : : bring : valuable
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 4 there are several programmer errors
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : seriously, this was written minutes ago. : That is my English...I proof reading one time then sent.
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 5 grammar error 吧
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : there are several programmer errors
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 6 Jesus
I spent too much time on this fxcking mitbbs
Forgot how to spell grammar
Thanks
: grammar error 吧
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : grammar error 吧
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 7 Jesus fucking chrisis.
that is a slang I like to say.
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : Jesus : I spent too much time on this fxcking mitbbs : Forgot how to spell grammar : Thanks : : : grammar error 吧 :
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 8 How can you get a green card without job?
: Jesus fucking chrisis.
: that is a slang I like to say.
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : Jesus fucking chrisis. : that is a slang I like to say.
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 9 I am making biscuits at Bojangles.
I am useful .
At the least, I can make biscuit.
It is not my fault that I have got so much education and end up in making
biscuits.
I am not good at making biscuits but I am trying to get a better job.
But people want to send me to mental hospital and I can't get over that
emotionally everyday. I hate those trigger. I want a peace mind.
But I am so restless...I will see those asshole in the court.
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : How can you get a green card without job? : : : Jesus fucking chrisis. : : that is a slang I like to say. :
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 10 Making biscuits is not a job that is qualified for green card
: I am making biscuits at Bojangles.
: I am useful .
: At the least, I can make biscuit.
: It is not my fault that I have got so much education and end up in
making
: biscuits.
: I am not good at making biscuits but I am trying to get a better job.
: But people want to send me to mental hospital and I can't get over
that
: emotionally everyday. I hate those trigger. I want a peace mind.
: But I am so restless...I will see those asshole in the court.
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : I am making biscuits at Bojangles. : I am useful . : At the least, I can make biscuit. : It is not my fault that I have got so much education and end up in making : biscuits. : I am not good at making biscuits but I am trying to get a better job. : But people want to send me to mental hospital and I can't get over that : emotionally everyday. I hate those trigger. I want a peace mind. : But I am so restless...I will see those asshole in the court.
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 11 how about those of my coworkers, Somali refugee.
those illegal Latinos...
my coworkers..
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : Making biscuits is not a job that is qualified for green card : : : I am making biscuits at Bojangles. : : I am useful . : : At the least, I can make biscuit. : : It is not my fault that I have got so much education and end up in : making : : biscuits. : : I am not good at making biscuits but I am trying to get a better job. : : But people want to send me to mental hospital and I can't get over
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 12 Refugees can get green card
Illegal immigrants not
: how about those of my coworkers, Somali refugee.
: those illegal Latinos...
: my coworkers..
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : how about those of my coworkers, Somali refugee. : those illegal Latinos... : my coworkers..
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 13 你决定美国的immigration policy吗?
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : Refugees can get green card : Illegal immigrants not : : : how about those of my coworkers, Somali refugee. : : those illegal Latinos... : : my coworkers.. :
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f*********0 发帖数: 4834 | 14 No
Not me
Trump does
: 你决定美国的immigration policy吗?
【在 C*********X 的大作中提到】 : 你决定美国的immigration policy吗?
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C*********X 发帖数: 10518 | 15 我的今天只剩下最后1个半小时,是quality time,可是肚子又饿了。
我被我的情绪控制了。。
fuck me
【在 f*********0 的大作中提到】 : No : Not me : Trump does : : : 你决定美国的immigration policy吗? :
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