t**x
发帖数: 20965 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 Dreamer 讨论区 】
发信人: Dreamer (不要问我从哪里来), 信区: Dreamer
标 题: 5年级孩子的文章，大家请评价一下文章和家长教育。
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Nov 18 01:03:06 2011, 美东)
I will tell you why I wasn't working very hard in elementary school. I wasn'
t very conscientious with my work. I didn't really check my work, and I
wrote messily. I didn't establish work habits of the highest caliber. I
talked a lot, and I delayed my chores so that I didn't have much time for
work. I also lied to escape work. My effort should go to a higher extent. I
should evaluate and revise my work. I should write neater. Also, I could
ignore all the extra noises and side converstions. I could just do my work
instead of telling Mom a lie, and feel guilty about it. Then I could do my
chores faster to leave time for my work. Overall I think I could improve a
lot of things so that I study better and work harder.
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根据要求用一些新的单词写的将来中学准备的一篇文章。文章要用到下面15个单词中的
5个。
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caliber
extent
ominous
perspective
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conscientious
establishing
paramount
content
assimilate
discern
adopting
cautious
请转发到family和parenting版面。 | t**x
发帖数: 20965 | | e******g
发帖数: 2336 | 3 我觉得还不错啊，这个孩子逻辑很清楚，用词，我不是美国人不好评价，但是没啥文彩
。家长教育，可以鼓励一下，既然这样认为，就要做到。我觉得等孩子再大一点可以告
诉他这不是唯一的生活方式，但是，这样严格要求自己的人会比较容易在社会中成功。 |
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