k****a
发帖数: 383 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 ME 讨论区 】
发信人: kakasa (kakasa), 信区: ME
标 题: 找工作近乎绝望，觉得可能还是简历的问题，请大家帮忙看看
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Oct 13 11:31:42 2009, 美东)
01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
Funded by: XXX. Co, US
Job functions:
Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
analysis
10/2007-10/2008 | n*******e
发帖数: 2057 | 2 nicely written
shaft
element
【在 k****a 的大作中提到】
: 【 以下文字转载自 ME 讨论区 】
: 发信人: kakasa (kakasa), 信区: ME
: 标 题: 找工作近乎绝望，觉得可能还是简历的问题，请大家帮忙看看
: 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Tue Oct 13 11:31:42 2009, 美东)
: 01/2009-present Structure Design and F.E analysis for TCP dryer shaft
: Funded by: XXX. Co, US
: Job functions:
: Designed new features for the existing product, improved the machine
: efficiency, executed job assignments consisting of meeting specifications
: and performing mechanical calculations, material selection and finite element
| s*****e
发帖数: 383 | 3 最好最前面有career summary
往牛了吹 比如 ME Ph.D., 10 years experience in XXX, including XX, XX.
虽然大家都说jobfox是骗钱的，但这还是jobfox第一次的free critic给提醒的。
不知道版上有人用过付费服务的么？ | W***e
发帖数: 5422 | 4 第一，job functions完全是废话，你不说人家也知道。
第二，你的项目只有你做了啥，能写一些结果不？比如findings,results,等等。这些
东西在简历里面是最关键的。你现在写的给我的感觉就是我去参加跑赛了，但是不知道
跑完没，也不知道跑了第几。 | l****c
发帖数: 838 | 5 I suggest you add more keywords, such as what software tools you used.
For mechanical design, such as Solid works/Autocad...
For FEA, Ansys, Nastran????
I had an onsite interview yesterday, they looked at the keywords on resume.
I was selected fro onsite because my former company used to be one of their
customers. | g*******e
发帖数: 3013 | 6 赞，愿帮忙心态。
.
their
【在 l****c 的大作中提到】
: I suggest you add more keywords, such as what software tools you used.
: For mechanical design, such as Solid works/Autocad...
: For FEA, Ansys, Nastran????
: I had an onsite interview yesterday, they looked at the keywords on resume.
: I was selected fro onsite because my former company used to be one of their
: customers.
| t****w
发帖数: 156 | 7 主要问题是关键词太少了，比如说这句
Designed new features for the existing product
什么样的new feature，哪方面的product。越多细节越好。虽然很general的简历可以
投很多行业，但是recruiter最喜欢看的还是有很多keyword的非常match的简历。 | k****a
发帖数: 383 | 8 非常感谢大家提的意见，我也发现了应该具体点，今天去了JOB fair,感觉那些招人的
就是把我的resume扫一下，在keywords那里画几个圈，如果他们发现不是很match的，
就直接说客套话结束语了 |
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