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z****e
发帖数: 721
1
前次看到哪位高手写颜色的英文诗,很棒,我也胡驺一首。轻拍!
Slow
After dropping off my 7 year old’s take-home binder at the school,
I pulled onto Spring Meadow.
All of a sudden everything 100 yards ahead of me seemed blurry
As if they were not things, but ideas
It appears that
my vision has deteriorated over night
but how can this be?
When everything else in life happens slowly
You see
Our bodies slowly losing their shapes
Parts that used to be well tucked in slowly protruding
Protruding ones slowly caving
Full ones slowly deflating
Flat ones slowly mushrooming
Equally slowly
affection spent
memories stale
dreams dwarfed
So is death
what a patient gardener
inch by inch
foot by foot
yard by yard
he rakes and tills us, preparing us for the moment
when he finally sods us
till our bodies are covered with his green moss
When everything in life is slow
life itself is death in slow motion
my sudden downturn of vision
seems strangely exciting
in a late August morning.
wh
发帖数: 141625
2
厉害。
死神那段,让我想起ingmar bergman的《The Seventh Seal》里的那个死神。

【在 z****e 的大作中提到】
: 前次看到哪位高手写颜色的英文诗,很棒,我也胡驺一首。轻拍!
: Slow
: After dropping off my 7 year old’s take-home binder at the school,
: I pulled onto Spring Meadow.
: All of a sudden everything 100 yards ahead of me seemed blurry
: As if they were not things, but ideas
: It appears that
: my vision has deteriorated over night
: but how can this be?
: When everything else in life happens slowly

z****e
发帖数: 721
3
老电影? 好看吗?
wh
发帖数: 141625
4
是,bergman的经典片,另外还有野草莓。seventh seal里死神无处不在、无处可逃的
感觉很强烈。那个死神拿着个耙子在草地还是庄稼上收割,这个形象给我印象很深,所
以看到你的诗就想起来了。

【在 z****e 的大作中提到】
: 老电影? 好看吗?
z****e
发帖数: 721
5
蛤!我是刚好家里找人重新铺草皮,想起来的。纯属巧合!
wh
发帖数: 141625
6
误打误撞啊。把死神比作reaper倒是西方的经典比喻。你的inch by inch, foot by
foot感染力还是很强……

【在 z****e 的大作中提到】
: 蛤!我是刚好家里找人重新铺草皮,想起来的。纯属巧合!
n******8
发帖数: 558
7
也喜欢这一届
So is death
what a patient gardener
inch by inch
foot by foot
yard by yard
he rakes and tills us, preparing us for the moment
when he finally sods us
till our bodies are covered with his green moss
z****e
发帖数: 721
8
谢谢nola大神。上回颜色诗就是你的吧。
那个网站,你提起的,原来要收费的,是吧?
n******8
发帖数: 558
9
收费的项目都是 optional

【在 z****e 的大作中提到】
: 谢谢nola大神。上回颜色诗就是你的吧。
: 那个网站,你提起的,原来要收费的,是吧?

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