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LoveNLust版 - I wish you were here
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w**********o
发帖数: 407
1
I wish you were here,
Every season of the year.
To my heart was like a corn maze,
But you can always find your ways.
Go down the love path,
You will find the holly truth.
I wish you were here,
To spend every minute, dear.
Gather your questions with whys,
Throw them far up to the skies.
Enjoy every moment while you can,
Nothing is happier than being my man.
I wish you were here,
Never leave to go anywhere.
Stay right here by my side,
You don’t have anything to abide.
While the night is still young,
Kiss me tender with your tongue.
I wish you were here,
Never have to wait there.
You are my delicious sweets
Having you is like having treats.
Starting munch, munch, munch,
With a crunch, crunch, crunch.
p******e
发帖数: 4263
2
zan

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

N****f
发帖数: 25759
3
Nicely done as always. The repetition in the first line of
each stanza works very effectively, and that little touch of
humor at the end is expertly placed.
Only one little thing, though: At the end of the first stanza,
wouldn't "holly wrath" rhyme better than "holly truth"? :-D
Y**********r
发帖数: 1222
4
敬佩

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

J******s
发帖数: 7538
5
Zan poet!
I love your poem!
add oil mm :-)

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

h*********r
发帖数: 7786
6
赞最后两句!

Starting munch, munch, munch,
With a crunch, crunch, crunch.

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

R*******w
发帖数: 1261
7
你六级考试多少分?

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

D********x
发帖数: 284
8
大赞!MM的英文诗非常棒!

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

w**********o
发帖数: 407
9
You are absolutely right. Bro.

【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Nicely done as always. The repetition in the first line of
: each stanza works very effectively, and that little touch of
: humor at the end is expertly placed.
: Only one little thing, though: At the end of the first stanza,
: wouldn't "holly wrath" rhyme better than "holly truth"? :-D

h*********1
发帖数: 257
10
nice
他离开了么

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

N****f
发帖数: 25759
11
Um...the first part or the second part? :-)

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: You are absolutely right. Bro.
w**********o
发帖数: 407
12
你给换的词。

【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Um...the first part or the second part? :-)
J*******k
发帖数: 3298
13
Nice!

【在 w**********o 的大作中提到】
: I wish you were here,
: Every season of the year.
: To my heart was like a corn maze,
: But you can always find your ways.
: Go down the love path,
: You will find the holly truth.
: I wish you were here,
: To spend every minute, dear.
: Gather your questions with whys,
: Throw them far up to the skies.

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