v******d
发帖数: 293 | 1 歌词稍微改了一点， 改称男生的角度， 谢谢. Hopefully, hit more note this time
I heard that you're settled down
That you found a girl and you're married now.
I heard that your dreams came true.
Guess she gave you things I didn't give to you. (Change to Couldn't, since
it is not I did not want to give you things, but I just could not)
Old friend, why are you so shy?
Ain't like you to hold back or hide from the light.
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it.
I had hoped you'd see my face and that you'd be reminded
That for me it isn't over.
Never mind, I'll find someone like you
I wish nothing but the best for you too
Don't forget me, I beg
I remember you said,
"Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead,
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead, "
Yeah
You know how the time flies
Only yesterday was the time of our lives
We were born and raised
In a summer haze
Bound by the surprise of our glory days
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it.
I'd hoped you'd see my face and that you'd be reminded
That for me it isn't over.
Never mind, I'll find someone like you
I wish nothing but the best for you too
Don't forget me, I beg
I remember you said,
"Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead."
Yeah
Nothing compares
No worries or cares
Regrets and mistakes
They are memories made.
Who would have known how bittersweet this would taste?
Never mind, I'll find someone like you
I wish nothing but the best for you
Don't forget me, I beg
I remember you said,
"Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead." |
a*******u
发帖数: 6324 | 2 唱得真不错！
后面folllow得很好。
前面哭腔稍微有点over。
等龙总来点评，
也等龙总自己按耐不住，来一个。
【在 v******d 的大作中提到】
: 歌词稍微改了一点， 改称男生的角度， 谢谢. Hopefully, hit more note this time
: I heard that you're settled down
: That you found a girl and you're married now.
: I heard that your dreams came true.
: Guess she gave you things I didn't give to you. (Change to Couldn't, since
: it is not I did not want to give you things, but I just could not)
: Old friend, why are you so shy?
: Ain't like you to hold back or hide from the light.
: I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited
: But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it.
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s*****o
发帖数: 1459 | |
L********n
发帖数: 1941 | 4 点评不敢，说点感受：
adele拼错了。。。
节奏有问题，主歌基本没在点儿上
哭腔同意味精的
也许可以考虑升一个调儿
但是这是版上第一个完整男生版someone like you，必须大赞！！整体感觉很对味！而
且最后几段唱的很不错。楼主继续加油 多出好歌！
【在 a*******u 的大作中提到】
: 唱得真不错！
: 后面folllow得很好。
: 前面哭腔稍微有点over。
: 等龙总来点评，
: 也等龙总自己按耐不住，来一个。
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b*******a
发帖数: 6852 | |
v******d
发帖数: 293 | 6 Thanks. You were right in the 哭腔 part. Since i was not familiar with the
song especially the 哭腔 part and listen several times and went with it, i
found it was rather difficult during recording, i will probably do it
again.
If you play the original along side my version, you will find they do not
sync since every one has a different understanding of the song, i thought
the current flow works better for me only the chorus part. For the
哭腔 part, you are right, theywere off from time to time.
The hardest part is missing pronouncing the 辅音 since it is not our mother
language
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.3.1
【在 L********n 的大作中提到】
: 点评不敢，说点感受：
: adele拼错了。。。
: 节奏有问题，主歌基本没在点儿上
: 哭腔同意味精的
: 也许可以考虑升一个调儿
: 但是这是版上第一个完整男生版someone like you，必须大赞！！整体感觉很对味！而
: 且最后几段唱的很不错。楼主继续加油 多出好歌！
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j*****t
发帖数: 5475 | 7 翻的不错。有些小改动蛮有意思。
建议楼主注意th的发音。
另外龙总说错了，男声从前juice有个自弹自唱的版本很不错的。
【在 v******d 的大作中提到】
: Thanks. You were right in the 哭腔 part. Since i was not familiar with the
: song especially the 哭腔 part and listen several times and went with it, i
: found it was rather difficult during recording, i will probably do it
: again.
: If you play the original along side my version, you will find they do not
: sync since every one has a different understanding of the song, i thought
: the current flow works better for me only the chorus part. For the
: 哭腔 part, you are right, theywere off from time to time.
: The hardest part is missing pronouncing the 辅音 since it is not our mother
: language
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j*****t
发帖数: 5475 | 8 龙总快上！我可以给你打个酱油。
【在 a*******u 的大作中提到】
: 唱得真不错！
: 后面folllow得很好。
: 前面哭腔稍微有点over。
: 等龙总来点评，
: 也等龙总自己按耐不住，来一个。
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L********n
发帖数: 1941 | 9 恩那，就是juice那首 才让我也想翻的。不过我印象里不是完整版。
【在 j*****t 的大作中提到】
: 翻的不错。有些小改动蛮有意思。
: 建议楼主注意th的发音。
: 另外龙总说错了，男声从前juice有个自弹自唱的版本很不错的。
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L********n
发帖数: 1941 | 10 你不是说对这歌审美疲劳了？ 嘿嘿
【在 j*****t 的大作中提到】
: 龙总快上！我可以给你打个酱油。
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w***w
发帖数: 10821 | |
a***e
发帖数: 2427 | |
a****g
发帖数: 2620 | |
S********e
发帖数: 1311 | 14 嗯嗯，同意味精哥，是有小哭腔呢~
很有感情。。。。
懒龙MM建议升调也应该试试~
越往越后越好听~ 总体很赞~~ |
v******d
发帖数: 293 | 15 No sichuanese
★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.3.1
【在 a***e 的大作中提到】
: 头几句是用上海话唱的吗？
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b*******i
发帖数: 1076 | 16 感觉是不是音调有点低，有点压着唱的感觉。
觉得升个调的话可能会好很多~~~ |
v******d
发帖数: 293 | 17 龙总， can you check wether it is getting better. I re-mixed it .
【在 L********n 的大作中提到】
: 点评不敢，说点感受：
: adele拼错了。。。
: 节奏有问题，主歌基本没在点儿上
: 哭腔同意味精的
: 也许可以考虑升一个调儿
: 但是这是版上第一个完整男生版someone like you，必须大赞！！整体感觉很对味！而
: 且最后几段唱的很不错。楼主继续加油 多出好歌！
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