m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 1 Sorry I have to write in English because a friend of mine does't speak
Chinese and I wanted to forward this thread to her.
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When I was taking these photos on the weekend, I kept telling myself that I
was working on a project, therefore the correlation between the photos
rather than the beauty of one single photo is what I should be focused on.
It turned out that these are just so-so photos, none of them stands out by
its own beauty. But that's fine, I told myself. No matter what, I edited
them in earnest. I tried my best to put them in the order that I feel good
about. This is my first time working on a photography project anyway.
Any comments are appreciated!!!!
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a*f 发帖数: 5682 | 2 like the color. can you talk about why you put 6 between the tree photos?
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【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : Sorry I have to write in English because a friend of mine does't speak : Chinese and I wanted to forward this thread to her. : =================================================================== : When I was taking these photos on the weekend, I kept telling myself that I : was working on a project, therefore the correlation between the photos : rather than the beauty of one single photo is what I should be focused on. : It turned out that these are just so-so photos, none of them stands out by : its own beauty. But that's fine, I told myself. No matter what, I edited : them in earnest. I tried my best to put them in the order that I feel good : about. This is my first time working on a photography project anyway.
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 3 I was debating with myself on that part too. I thought those two photos
suggested the human life...not sure if it's a convincing reason though...
【在 a*f 的大作中提到】 : like the color. can you talk about why you put 6 between the tree photos? : : I
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W*********n 发帖数: 4624 | 4 拍的不错,喜欢1, 6, 7。都是胶片?
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【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : Sorry I have to write in English because a friend of mine does't speak : Chinese and I wanted to forward this thread to her. : =================================================================== : When I was taking these photos on the weekend, I kept telling myself that I : was working on a project, therefore the correlation between the photos : rather than the beauty of one single photo is what I should be focused on. : It turned out that these are just so-so photos, none of them stands out by : its own beauty. But that's fine, I told myself. No matter what, I edited : them in earnest. I tried my best to put them in the order that I feel good : about. This is my first time working on a photography project anyway.
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l******g 发帖数: 2076 | 5 个人比较喜欢 1,2,3,6,4,5,7 的顺序。哈哈。
If you know English ONLY, here is the comment: Nice images.
【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : I was debating with myself on that part too. I thought those two photos : suggested the human life...not sure if it's a convincing reason though...
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 6 Thank you. They're fujifilm superia 400.
I took a few digital photos but the color is disastrous.
【在 W*********n 的大作中提到】 : 拍的不错,喜欢1, 6, 7。都是胶片? : : I
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 7 Thank you!
【在 l******g 的大作中提到】 : 个人比较喜欢 1,2,3,6,4,5,7 的顺序。哈哈。 : If you know English ONLY, here is the comment: Nice images.
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a*f 发帖数: 5682 | 9 ah - so you were trying to sequence them based on concept. I normally
sequence photos purely on visual properties. I tend to focus on what I saw
rather than what I think. Anyway, not bad pictures. You might need multiple
trips to finish a project, though.
【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : I was debating with myself on that part too. I thought those two photos : suggested the human life...not sure if it's a convincing reason though...
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 10 Big Sur. :) Strictly speaking, it's not a project. It's nothing but a set of
correlated photos.
Gurus keep saying that novices should work on projects but not individual
photos. http://www.mitbbs.com/article/PhotoForum/31332345_3.html
【在 b*****t 的大作中提到】 : What is the project?
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 11 Actually, I didn't think that much. I just had a feeling that #6 has a
different style than those ocean photos, but I didn't figure out why until
you asked me. I might be wrong.
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【在 a*f 的大作中提到】 : ah - so you were trying to sequence them based on concept. I normally : sequence photos purely on visual properties. I tend to focus on what I saw : rather than what I think. Anyway, not bad pictures. You might need multiple : trips to finish a project, though.
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 12 Being a novice in favor of pure formalism, i tend to focus on what i saw too
. :)
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【在 a*f 的大作中提到】 : ah - so you were trying to sequence them based on concept. I normally : sequence photos purely on visual properties. I tend to focus on what I saw : rather than what I think. Anyway, not bad pictures. You might need multiple : trips to finish a project, though.
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a*f 发帖数: 5682 | 13
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BTW, that's mostly for street photography. You surely don't have to always
have a serias of photos as a piece of work. There are plenty of serias in
which individual photos can stand out as a standalone piece of work.
【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : Big Sur. :) Strictly speaking, it's not a project. It's nothing but a set of : correlated photos. : Gurus keep saying that novices should work on projects but not individual : photos. http://www.mitbbs.com/article/PhotoForum/31332345_3.html
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 14 Ah I see. Thanks!
But anyway, I don't know how to categorize these photos...My goal was not to
take landscape pictures only.
【在 a*f 的大作中提到】 : : of : BTW, that's mostly for street photography. You surely don't have to always : have a serias of photos as a piece of work. There are plenty of serias in : which individual photos can stand out as a standalone piece of work.
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a********l 发帖数: 39524 | 15 5 and 7 are not half bad. since you have a friend watching us: everyone here
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 16 嘴真甜
here
【在 a********l 的大作中提到】 : 5 and 7 are not half bad. since you have a friend watching us: everyone here : loves you with intense fervor, men or women.
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b*****t 发帖数: 3928 | 17 No matter how I look, the 1st and 2nd are the same to me. So I go 3,2,6,4,5,
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 18 谢谢!我觉得1比2强太多了吧?2的构图很不平衡,左上角太暗了,那个画龙点睛的瀑
布整个都在阴影里,是很失败的一张。这个景点是big sur最著名的一个景点,很多人
都拿着相机狂拍,我当时一看光线不行,瀑布刚好在阴影里,我就决定一张都不拍了。
可是我LD在旁边唧唧歪歪的,问我怎么不拍啊?这么有名的地方你竟然不拍啊?我就为
了让她闭嘴就按了一张。结果洗出来以后一看片子,我就直接把它delete了。但是组成
集子的时候,我觉得要是能再多一张coast的就会好一些,于是,我就把2这张又勉强拿
出来用了。从单张的角度看,2是失败的,但是放在一个集子里,我觉得它起到的作用
还凑合。
2这张的地理位置,如果是日落时候去拍,应该是非常棒的一个景点,但是我不热衷于
拍风光,所以,我就没有安排日落时分专程跑去那里拍照。
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【在 b*****t 的大作中提到】 : No matter how I look, the 1st and 2nd are the same to me. So I go 3,2,6,4,5, : 7
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 19 这两张是用数码照的,当我看到这两张的时候,过去那种熟悉的既失望又糟心的感觉又
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a********l 发帖数: 39524 | 20 我也在此拍过,跟你的感觉很相似。
【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : 这两张是用数码照的,当我看到这两张的时候,过去那种熟悉的既失望又糟心的感觉又 : 来了。。。
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 21 换胶片拍就不一样了
【在 a********l 的大作中提到】 : 我也在此拍过,跟你的感觉很相似。
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b****g 发帖数: 331 | 22 其实你的数字照片并不是不如你的胶片照, 只是色有些冷, 这在软件里很容易解决.
【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : 换胶片拍就不一样了
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 23 恩,对于会PS的来说,把那两张数码的打扮出彩来应该不难,但是,胶片吸引我的理由
之一就是不再需要大量的后期处理了。:)
另外,我觉得那两张不仅是色调冷的问题,我觉得整个画面都显得非常flat,色彩缺乏
层次感,尤其是有公路的那张,远景上的东西都象泡在水里洗过似的。如果是胶片的,
即便是很淡的色彩,也都非常有层次,有种力透纸背的感觉。:) 另外,我也不知道是
怎么回事,并没有挂着劣质filter,为什么会这样整体偏蓝??
【在 b****g 的大作中提到】 : 其实你的数字照片并不是不如你的胶片照, 只是色有些冷, 这在软件里很容易解决.
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i***f 发帖数: 10682 | 24 这些都是到此一游吧。
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【在 m******1 的大作中提到】 : Sorry I have to write in English because a friend of mine does't speak : Chinese and I wanted to forward this thread to her. : =================================================================== : When I was taking these photos on the weekend, I kept telling myself that I : was working on a project, therefore the correlation between the photos : rather than the beauty of one single photo is what I should be focused on. : It turned out that these are just so-so photos, none of them stands out by : its own beauty. But that's fine, I told myself. No matter what, I edited : them in earnest. I tried my best to put them in the order that I feel good : about. This is my first time working on a photography project anyway.
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m******1 发帖数: 19713 | 25 如果alf那些爱尔兰拍的都谦称为到此一游,那你把我这些叫做到此一游也太抬举我了
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【在 i***f 的大作中提到】 : 这些都是到此一游吧。 : : I : ★ 发自iPhone App: ChineseWeb 7.8
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