P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 1 Saturday trip
In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
//没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555 | b****s
发帖数: 10197 | 2 patpat
不过他写得很流畅啊，如果我儿子二年级能有这水平，我会乐开花的。
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 3 哈哈,握手,我们也去了.是周二去的.回来的Journal也是没提在里头做啥了...
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 4 thanks thanks
二年级开始写作要求骤然提高啊
一年级只要写了就行了，二年级要五分钟写7句话。
可是这个离题万里怎么办？
【在 b****s 的大作中提到】
: patpat
: 不过他写得很流畅啊，如果我儿子二年级能有这水平，我会乐开花的。
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 5 really？ hand hand！
你们journal里提啥了，起码没complain妈妈吧。。
在我的强烈要求下，人添了一句：we saw a skull rock, a cactus, and Joshua
trees.
完了。
【在 K****y 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈,握手,我们也去了.是周二去的.回来的Journal也是没提在里头做啥了...
| K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 6 他们看的和关心的实在是太不同了,同叹气...
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: thanks thanks
: 二年级开始写作要求骤然提高啊
: 一年级只要写了就行了，二年级要五分钟写7句话。
: 可是这个离题万里怎么办？
| i****c
发帖数: 2092 | 7 写得不错啊, 吐啥血?
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| s*******l
发帖数: 4870 | 8 哈哈，好喜欢读小人写的故事，
特别避重就轻，去哪儿都白去，
玩儿一整天，结果人家只吃icecream那部分 | P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 9 总得写写国家公园里有些啥，那些东西都啥样，他玩了啥，好不好玩儿什么的吧
人就写了，我去了，我回来了，妈妈老要呆在外面，我只穿了啥啥，把我冻着了。
【在 i****c 的大作中提到】
: 写得不错啊, 吐啥血?
| K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 10 没Complain老妈倒是.
他就说我们去了Barker Dam Trail,Saw lots of Joshua trees.
压根没提石头,他还兴高采烈的爬来着...还说很Fun.
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: really？ hand hand！
: 你们journal里提啥了，起码没complain妈妈吧。。
: 在我的强烈要求下，人添了一句：we saw a skull rock, a cactus, and Joshua
: trees.
: 完了。
| | | P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 11 呵呵，好歹冰淇淋是出去玩的时候吃的啊
我们这个，就盼啊盼啊，终于回家，我可以玩video game 了。
【在 s*******l 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈，好喜欢读小人写的故事，
: 特别避重就轻，去哪儿都白去，
: 玩儿一整天，结果人家只吃icecream那部分
| i****c
发帖数: 2092 | 12 你那是你的感受, 人写得是他的感受吧. //run
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: 总得写写国家公园里有些啥，那些东西都啥样，他玩了啥，好不好玩儿什么的吧
: 人就写了，我去了，我回来了，妈妈老要呆在外面，我只穿了啥啥，把我冻着了。
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 13 我也觉着了，白玩了一天人家没感受！
怎么推让他感受感受？？
【在 i****c 的大作中提到】
: 你那是你的感受, 人写得是他的感受吧. //run
| s*******l
发帖数: 4870 | 14 就是，我现在心态超好，只要她乐意写我就高兴
【在 i****c 的大作中提到】
: 你那是你的感受, 人写得是他的感受吧. //run
| p****i
发帖数: 6135 | 15 咿， 这么巧， 我们周五也去了joshua tree national park。
LD带两娃娃去的。
我在旅馆里补觉。 周四晚上midnight madness去desert hill outlet
从12点一直血拼到早上5点。。。
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 16 赞！我都不知道有midnight madness。。扼腕ing
【在 p****i 的大作中提到】
: 咿， 这么巧， 我们周五也去了joshua tree national park。
: LD带两娃娃去的。
: 我在旅馆里补觉。 周四晚上midnight madness去desert hill outlet
: 从12点一直血拼到早上5点。。。
| E*********e
发帖数: 10297 | 17
Batman.
很好啊，没有任何错误，而且肯写，就是进步
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 18 我们是为了lego calender 才写的。。
哪里像丫丫那么自觉啊。。。羡慕ing
【在 s*******l 的大作中提到】
: 就是，我现在心态超好，只要她乐意写我就高兴
| b******r
发帖数: 3206 | 19 哈哈，人家给冻得那样了，还肯写， 不错咯！我们三月底去的，晚上零度，现在怕是
更冷了。
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 20 管他为啥写,是不是自发,只要写了,就成, :-)
对了,你那个Writing Book怎么样?
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: 我们是为了lego calender 才写的。。
: 哪里像丫丫那么自觉啊。。。羡慕ing
| | | p****i
发帖数: 6135 | 21 不知道的好啊
我到了那， 一看那人挤人的阵势， 立马就high了
冲动购物了n多。。。
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: 赞！我都不知道有midnight madness。。扼腕ing
| j*****e
发帖数: 421 | | i*******9
发帖数: 2995 | 23 赞“mom read a book, ”
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 24 下午三点以前还很暖和
三四点以后，就刮起风来了。。
娃怒问我：你到底知不知道沙漠气候是啥样的！
至少人家该知道沙漠气候是啥样的了。 ：P
【在 b******r 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈，人家给冻得那样了，还肯写， 不错咯！我们三月底去的，晚上零度，现在怕是
: 更冷了。
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 25 娃说太简单了 ：（
我看最后两课还挺好的，讲怎么structure文章的，前面的都是标点，大小写什么的练
习。和他们上
课做的差不多。
【在 K****y 的大作中提到】
: 管他为啥写,是不是自发,只要写了,就成, :-)
: 对了,你那个Writing Book怎么样?
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 26 literally， several pages of a book. :P
【在 i*******9 的大作中提到】
: 赞“mom read a book, ”
| K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 27 看看我们的2年纪的游记，一样就记住Water Slide了，他念念不忘的东东。
On Day 2, we drove to the Joshua Tree Park. It was a very long drive. On the
way to the park we stopped at the Joshua Tree visitor center. Then we went
driving again. When we came to the Joshua Tree Park, we stopped and went
hiking in the barker dam. In the Joshua Tree Park, there was many beautiful
sight. Also, there were many Joshua trees. We went back to our hotel. Then
we went to the pool. The pool was warm. But if you went to the spa first,
then it would feel cold. The water slide closed at 4:00pm. We stayed until
about 6:00pm. We were all in the spa. We went home(should be hotel) and I
watched Chopped. It was a great TV channel. I liked it because you got to
cook. After a while we ate pizza huts leftovers.
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| a****e
发帖数: 5562 | 28 哈哈哈跟我家一样一样的
【在 s*******l 的大作中提到】
: 哈哈，好喜欢读小人写的故事，
: 特别避重就轻，去哪儿都白去，
: 玩儿一整天，结果人家只吃icecream那部分
| l*******e
发帖数: 2431 | 29 哈哈，多么可爱啊
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 30 写得真好啊，重点是有好多美景啊，做了什么啊，都有写到！
羡慕得不行。。。
the
went
beautiful
【在 K****y 的大作中提到】
: 看看我们的2年纪的游记，一样就记住Water Slide了，他念念不忘的东东。
: On Day 2, we drove to the Joshua Tree Park. It was a very long drive. On the
: way to the park we stopped at the Joshua Tree visitor center. Then we went
: driving again. When we came to the Joshua Tree Park, we stopped and went
: hiking in the barker dam. In the Joshua Tree Park, there was many beautiful
: sight. Also, there were many Joshua trees. We went back to our hotel. Then
: we went to the pool. The pool was warm. But if you went to the spa first,
: then it would feel cold. The water slide closed at 4:00pm. We stayed until
: about 6:00pm. We were all in the spa. We went home(should be hotel) and I
: watched Chopped. It was a great TV channel. I liked it because you got to
| | | K****y
发帖数: 2762 | 31 我喜欢你家的，写的很有特点，用词也好，Freeze呀，Pack呀。除了没写公园， ：）
但是好可爱呀。。。
我们家的就是一流水帐。。。。HOHO。。。Long Way To Go。。。
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: 写得真好啊，重点是有好多美景啊，做了什么啊，都有写到！
: 羡慕得不行。。。
:
: the
: went
: beautiful
| m****y
发帖数: 3437 | 32 写得是自己的感受，有什么值得吐血的地方???
娃肯写，是最重要的，给你床被子，乐去吧！
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| b****s
发帖数: 10197 | 33 说到点子上了，只要娃肯写，就谢天谢地了。
【在 m****y 的大作中提到】
: 写得是自己的感受，有什么值得吐血的地方???
: 娃肯写，是最重要的，给你床被子，乐去吧！
| b****s
发帖数: 10197 | 34 挺能写的，赞！
the
went
beautiful
【在 K****y 的大作中提到】
: 看看我们的2年纪的游记，一样就记住Water Slide了，他念念不忘的东东。
: On Day 2, we drove to the Joshua Tree Park. It was a very long drive. On the
: way to the park we stopped at the Joshua Tree visitor center. Then we went
: driving again. When we came to the Joshua Tree Park, we stopped and went
: hiking in the barker dam. In the Joshua Tree Park, there was many beautiful
: sight. Also, there were many Joshua trees. We went back to our hotel. Then
: we went to the pool. The pool was warm. But if you went to the spa first,
: then it would feel cold. The water slide closed at 4:00pm. We stayed until
: about 6:00pm. We were all in the spa. We went home(should be hotel) and I
: watched Chopped. It was a great TV channel. I liked it because you got to
| e*e
发帖数: 6808 | 35 写这么好！！
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| P*********d
发帖数: 4064 | 36 talking about 流水帐。。。。
http://www.mitbbs.com/clubarticle/K12/161463_3.html
【在 K****y 的大作中提到】
: 我喜欢你家的，写的很有特点，用词也好，Freeze呀，Pack呀。除了没写公园， ：）
: 但是好可爱呀。。。
: 我们家的就是一流水帐。。。。HOHO。。。Long Way To Go。。。
| s*********8
发帖数: 939 | 37 写得很好啊，清清楚楚，我觉得很传神的，嘻嘻
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
| K*******l
发帖数: 3747 | 38 not bad not bad... :p
【在 P*********d 的大作中提到】
: Saturday trip
: In the morning, we got ready for a trip. We were going to Joshua Tree
: National Park. After we packed up, we rode a Honda to the national
: park. In the morning, it was getting cold, I was wearing a shirt, a
: sweater and a jacket. In the night, it was freezing all because Mom.
: Mom liked being outside. And finally I got home. I played Lego Batman.
: Then I took a shower, mom read a book, and I went right to sleep.
: //没国家公园什么事儿。。。吐血的就只我一个。。。5555555
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