N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 1 Christine's First Day on the Plantation
(Part 2 of 2)
It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
again shackled and chained.
"I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
They walked into a small open area in |
G*********o
发帖数: 49669 | 2 妈呀
英文色文
orz啊
Christine's First Day on the Plantation
(Part 2 of 2)
It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
again shackled and chained.
"I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
They walked into a smal
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
: "I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
: informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
: But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
: They walked into a small open area in
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 3 呵呵，耶兄折杀老夫！
【在 G*********o 的大作中提到】
: 妈呀
: 英文色文
: orz啊
:
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
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G*********o
发帖数: 49669 | 4 不敢，我回头漫漫读，现在旁边有同事
呵呵，耶兄折杀老夫！
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: 呵呵，耶兄折杀老夫！
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s*****l
发帖数: 2242 | 5 拉同事一起来读吧～
【在 G*********o 的大作中提到】
: 不敢，我回头漫漫读，现在旁边有同事
:
: 呵呵，耶兄折杀老夫！
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G*********o
发帖数: 49669 | 6 我希望你是我的同事
拉同事一起来读吧～
【在 s*****l 的大作中提到】
: 拉同事一起来读吧～
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g*******s
发帖数: 2054 | 7 以狼兄的fantasy和imagination power， 写一部像Suzanne Collins 的 Hunger Games
应该足足有余
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
: "I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
: informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
: But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
: They walked into a small open area in
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 8 汗一个——俺刚去Wikipedia同Suzanne Collins和她的Hunger Games初次见面。
Games
【在 g*******s 的大作中提到】
: 以狼兄的fantasy和imagination power， 写一部像Suzanne Collins 的 Hunger Games
: 应该足足有余
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s*****l
发帖数: 2242 | 9 狼兄如此博学之人也有不知道的地方啊：-）
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: 汗一个——俺刚去Wikipedia同Suzanne Collins和她的Hunger Games初次见面。
:
: Games
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m*******o
发帖数: 4113 | 10 很残酷的slave world
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
: "I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
: informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
: But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
: They walked into a small open area in
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m*******o
发帖数: 4113 | 11 赞活灵活现的南方口音
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
: "I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
: informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
: But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
: They walked into a small open area in
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 12 Subgirl不要落井下石！ :-)
【在 s*****l 的大作中提到】
: 狼兄如此博学之人也有不知道的地方啊：-）
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 13 嘿嘿……
【在 m*******o 的大作中提到】
: 很残酷的slave world
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 14 呵呵，这个泡泡有经验。
【在 m*******o 的大作中提到】
: 赞活灵活现的南方口音
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g*******s
发帖数: 2054 | 15 我是觉得他写点有情但少色fantasy小说，早该上 New York Time' Best Sellers list
拉，而且可能都已有电影了.你看看Harry Potter， Twilight。。。。
【在 s*****l 的大作中提到】
: 狼兄如此博学之人也有不知道的地方啊：-）
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 16 三弟过奖太甚。那类鸿篇巨制不是一时兴起就能搞定，灵感之外，还是需要
投入大量精力时间，非寻常人所能随意问津。
list
【在 g*******s 的大作中提到】
: 我是觉得他写点有情但少色fantasy小说，早该上 New York Time' Best Sellers list
: 拉，而且可能都已有电影了.你看看Harry Potter， Twilight。。。。
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a****a
发帖数: 3479 | 17 等狼兄退休吧， 倒是时间精力都是大把的
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: 三弟过奖太甚。那类鸿篇巨制不是一时兴起就能搞定，灵感之外，还是需要
: 投入大量精力时间，非寻常人所能随意问津。
:
: list
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x*******i
发帖数: 1007 | 18 今天有点时间，总算读完了狼兄的旧做，很细致， 而且很精心。
狼兄喜欢从外景入手，然后蹂躏内心，呵呵。 |
m*******o
发帖数: 4113 | 19
~~~~~~~~~
LOL
【在 x*******i 的大作中提到】
: 今天有点时间，总算读完了狼兄的旧做，很细致， 而且很精心。
: 狼兄喜欢从外景入手，然后蹂躏内心，呵呵。
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 20 呵呵，心痛才是真痛。
【在 x*******i 的大作中提到】
: 今天有点时间，总算读完了狼兄的旧做，很细致， 而且很精心。
: 狼兄喜欢从外景入手，然后蹂躏内心，呵呵。
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i********e
发帖数: 5996 | 21 支持狼兄大作!!!
再接再厉!
再创佳作!
【在 N****f 的大作中提到】
: Christine's First Day on the Plantation
: (Part 2 of 2)
: It was dusk when Ron finally led Christine out of the mansion
: by the chain on her collar. She was still naked. Her wrists were now
: tied tightly behind her back with a nylon cord, and her ankles were
: again shackled and chained.
: "I think I'll find you stuff to do around the house," Ron had
: informed her. "It's better for you, and better for my cotton, too.
: But you'd better live with the other slaves anyway."
: They walked into a small open area in
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N****f
发帖数: 25759 | 22 多谢爱妹妹捧场！不过俺老挂笔多年，早已江郎才尽。老矣，更复何言。
【在 i********e 的大作中提到】
: 支持狼兄大作!!!
: 再接再厉!
: 再创佳作!
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