s**********g
发帖数: 26 | 1 【 以下文字转载自 EnglishChat 讨论区 】
发信人: sparklingEng (火星撞地球), 信区: EnglishChat
标 题: 自己翻的《孔乙己》， 大家指教指教！
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Feb 8 13:20:13 2009)
Kong Yiji
By Lu Xun
The layouts of the wine taverns in Lu Town is quite different fromthose in other towns. There is always an L-shaped counter facingthe street. Hot water is kept available at the counter so that itcan be used to heat the wine at any
time. Laborers, back from workat noon or dusk, would spend 4 coppers to get a
bowl of wine – thatwas the price |
s*******n
发帖数: 40 | 2 很早以前就有国内著名作家翻译过的
is
【在 s**********g 的大作中提到】
: 【 以下文字转载自 EnglishChat 讨论区 】
: 发信人: sparklingEng (火星撞地球), 信区: EnglishChat
: 标 题: 自己翻的《孔乙己》， 大家指教指教！
: 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Feb 8 13:20:13 2009)
: Kong Yiji
: By Lu Xun
: The layouts of the wine taverns in Lu Town is quite different fromthose in other towns. There is always an L-shaped counter facingthe street. Hot water is kept available at the counter so that itcan be used to heat the wine at any
: time. Laborers, back from workat noon or dusk, would spend 4 coppers to get a
: bowl of wine – thatwas the price
|
s**********g
发帖数: 26 | |
s**********g
发帖数: 26 | |
w***3
发帖数: 938 | 5 你语法不过关，还是别作这个翻译吧。
第一句话用are,第三句话没必要用kept,没见过这么说的。
其他我还没看，另外用词和写法表明你英文写作很一般。
呵呵，有点太mean了，别往心里去。
other towns. There is always an L-shaped counter facingthe street. Hot
water is kept available at the counter so that itcan be used to heat the
wine at any
get a
costs 10
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: 【 以下文字转载自 EnglishChat 讨论区 】
: 发信人: sparklingEng (火星撞地球), 信区: EnglishChat
: 标 题: 自己翻的《孔乙己》， 大家指教指教！
: 发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Sun Feb 8 13:20:13 2009)
: Kong Yiji
: By Lu Xun
: The layouts of the wine taverns in Lu Town is quite different fromthose in other towns. There is always an L-shaped counter facingthe street. Hot water is kept available at the counter so that itcan be used to heat the wine at any
: time. Laborers, back from workat noon or dusk, would spend 4 coppers to get a
: bowl of wine – thatwas the price
|
S**********h
发帖数: 25 | |
