l******g
发帖数: 2076 | 1 先自我批判，然后欢迎大家补充。加油加油。
传说中的适马35MM F1.4
1.觉得表情和眼色可以再好一点。那天化妆据说有点失败，MM很不舒服。
2.POSE可能需要换个角度，总觉得扭不够。但我也不知道怎么扭。囧。
3.或许再靠墙一点，手臂都一点？有种奇怪的感觉。但是好喜欢妆面。
4.应该算比较满意的一张吧，MM的表情要再加强些？
5.这个，恩。好，过。
6.MM累了。构图的话，鼻子应该是过了点。
7.MM对泡泡没有抵抗力。 |
C********o
发帖数: 5368 | |
l******g
发帖数: 2076 | 3 恩，我一直在拿捏肤色，总觉得太白不大喜欢，然后太黄又有点过。就一直没找到平衡
点。
这套的话，没有做很重的后期，只是闪光灯上加了淡橙色的滤片。所以会泛点橙黄色。
【在 C********o 的大作中提到】
: 皮肤上总是泛点色，是要这样的效果还是下手太重
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l*****s
发帖数: 1754 | |
n*******h
发帖数: 496 | 5 表情和Pose稍有些僵硬，色彩还算舒服，光线和构图失之平庸，多合作几次应该会有所
改进 |
a********l
发帖数: 39524 | |
o**s
发帖数: 3412 | 7 She is so pretty. Her face and body are naturally 3D looking.
I dun know much about strobe, but think you could really leap if you study a
bit from a book.
composition wise I like 1 and 2 the best.
Great job! |
o**s
发帖数: 3412 | 8 Also i am wondering with her outfit (black color), what kind of background
would be the best. Maybe white???? Really dun know. But the goal i think is
for the eyes of the viewers to focus on her, not the background. She needs
to pop out. |
o**s
发帖数: 3412 | 9 I have a lot of respect for you.
I want to learn/practice strobe on people too. But too lazy to find model
and it is a ton of hard work, a ton of work for the model - ain't easy ya. |
p********e
发帖数: 1944 | 10 我怎么觉得最后一张的场景比较适合糖水片儿啊~
【在 l******g 的大作中提到】
: 恩，我一直在拿捏肤色，总觉得太白不大喜欢，然后太黄又有点过。就一直没找到平衡
: 点。
: 这套的话，没有做很重的后期，只是闪光灯上加了淡橙色的滤片。所以会泛点橙黄色。
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l******g
发帖数: 2076 | 11 Thanks, I agree that we should focus more on subject instead of the
background. Let me try some different places next time.
is
【在 o**s 的大作中提到】
: Also i am wondering with her outfit (black color), what kind of background
: would be the best. Maybe white???? Really dun know. But the goal i think is
: for the eyes of the viewers to focus on her, not the background. She needs
: to pop out.
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l******g
发帖数: 2076 | 12 囧，衣服不对的啦。应该穿花蝴蝶。
【在 p********e 的大作中提到】
: 我怎么觉得最后一张的场景比较适合糖水片儿啊~
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