F*******y
发帖数: 885 | 1 Wandering on an autumn day
Air is warm and bright
Crispy leaves keep falling
I feel asleep but suddenly wake up
It's a slander tree waving
It's a colorful flower inviting
There is a pair of bumble bees
Flying between us
It's a gentle snowflake dancing
It's a hard iceberg standing
There is a ray of neon lights
flashing upon us |
L******h
发帖数: 4361 | 2 好意识流呀。怎么白天neon lights都出来了？ |
F*******y
发帖数: 885 | 3 嘿嘿，毕业生里的霍夫曼，不是在白天也被照了一下吗？
好意识流呀。怎么白天neon lights都出来了？
【在 L******h 的大作中提到】
: 好意识流呀。怎么白天neon lights都出来了？
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L******h
发帖数: 4361 | 4 嗯，开始有晕眩感了。
【在 F*******y 的大作中提到】
: 嘿嘿，毕业生里的霍夫曼，不是在白天也被照了一下吗？
:
: 好意识流呀。怎么白天neon lights都出来了？
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a******m
发帖数: 3422 | 5
也许和Hildegard von Bingen一样的灵光重现？
【在 L******h 的大作中提到】
: 好意识流呀。怎么白天neon lights都出来了？
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s*********8
发帖数: 334 | 6
Wake up->awake?
Us->you and me?
【在 F*******y 的大作中提到】
: Wandering on an autumn day
: Air is warm and bright
: Crispy leaves keep falling
: I feel asleep but suddenly wake up
: It's a slander tree waving
: It's a colorful flower inviting
: There is a pair of bumble bees
: Flying between us
: It's a gentle snowflake dancing
: It's a hard iceberg standing
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F*******y
发帖数: 885 | 7
Wake up->awake?
[Yes, it is much better. Thx.]
[No, it is about a girl and me, not you. ]
【在 s*********8 的大作中提到】
:
: Wake up->awake?
: Us->you and me?
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L******h
发帖数: 4361 | 8 Haha, what if he is also a girl, and a pretty one?
【在 F*******y 的大作中提到】
:
: Wake up->awake?
: [Yes, it is much better. Thx.]
: [No, it is about a girl and me, not you. ]
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F*******y
发帖数: 885 | 9 Hehe. I think us is better than you and me in this poem.
【在 L******h 的大作中提到】
: Haha, what if he is also a girl, and a pretty one?
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