G******8
发帖数: 41 | 1 几个问题：1.信好象太长了，有整整一面，但又不知道哪里可以删一点。
2.第三次签证，信里要不要提以前被拒二次，妈妈一直没能来美国看我很难
过。不知道3000如何把信写的信服一点。
谢谢大家！
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is xx writing you the letter with great pleasure, to support my
mother’s application for B2 visa. I would like to invite my mother, xx, to
visit us around Thanksgiving of this year, ideally, starting from November
15, 2014 to February 13, 2015. I am currently working as xxx, under my
Greencard.
It has been two years since we met last time when I went back to China.
I have been missing my parents very much. I being the only child, my
parents must be missing me even more. My father is currently a xx, and the
college doesn’t allow him to take a long vacation by Chinese New Year. He
plans to come to visit me together with my mother next time if he can. My
mother has never been US before, and I really want to show her how my 4
years’ life and work here looks like. Besides that, it would be great if my
mother can come to visit me from November to February, because it’s full
of exciting events during the Thanksgiving and Christmas. I also plan to
take her to New York City, Philadelphia, Washington D.C., Atlantic City, and
I may take her to San Francisco to see the great sunshine state.
My mother will return to China before Chinese New Year because my
father and maternal grandmother are staying in China and need her back. She
has multiple possessions (a condo, bank deposits, etc.) in addition to her
pensions, and she enjoys full benefits from the state, including
governmental sponsored health insurances and annuities for retirees. And she
has to be present in person in xx city, xx province for the interview for
validation of annuity qualification every year. It is impossible for her to
give up all these together with her husband, mother and relatives and her
established social status to become a burden on US tax payers.
My mother will pay for her round-trip tickets. And during her stay in
the United States, I will be responsible for all her expenses such as
housing and food, travel and health insurance.
I will appreciate any courtesy you may extend to my mother so she can
obtain visa to visit us in the United States. For your convenience, I have
prepared a document list and a travel plan. Your time and kind help are
greatly appreciated.
Sincerely yours, | G******8
发帖数: 41 | | j**i
发帖数: 375 | 3 个人意见，仅供参考。祝好运!
<<< ideally, starting from November 15, 2014 to February 13, 2015.
ideally? 还是直接写日期比较清楚。
<<< It has been two years since we met last time when I went back to China.
I have been missing my parents very much. I being the only child, my
parents must be missing me even more.
两年都没见面了, 为啥不回国呢... 挖坑自跳的地方建议删除. -_-
<<< My father is currently a xx, and the college doesn’t allow him to take
a long vacation by Chinese New Year.
....既然在大学上班，寒假总是有的......所以不和你母亲一起赴美有点不合理。挖坑
自跳……
<<< 第二段和第三段可以结合，直接写清楚母亲在国内的状态以表明她不会在美国滞留。
关于前2次拒签，无需在信里写出来。 | V****e
发帖数: 858 | 4 能说说前两次拒签的时间和原因吗？
【在 G******8 的大作中提到】
: 有没有好心人帮忙看看,3000压力好大啊
| G******8
发帖数: 41 | 5 非常感謝
China.
take
【在 j**i 的大作中提到】
: 个人意见，仅供参考。祝好运!
: <<< ideally, starting from November 15, 2014 to February 13, 2015.
: ideally? 还是直接写日期比较清楚。
: <<< It has been two years since we met last time when I went back to China.
: I have been missing my parents very much. I being the only child, my
: parents must be missing me even more.
: 两年都没见面了, 为啥不回国呢... 挖坑自跳的地方建议删除. -_-
: <<< My father is currently a xx, and the college doesn’t allow him to take
: a long vacation by Chinese New Year.
: ....既然在大学上班，寒假总是有的......所以不和你母亲一起赴美有点不合理。挖坑
| G******8
发帖数: 41 | 6 11年
14年5月
【在 V****e 的大作中提到】
: 能说说前两次拒签的时间和原因吗？
| G******8
发帖数: 41 | 7 你是指直接写月份,from November 12014 to February 2015? thank you
【在 j**i 的大作中提到】
: 个人意见，仅供参考。祝好运!
: <<< ideally, starting from November 15, 2014 to February 13, 2015.
: ideally? 还是直接写日期比较清楚。
: <<< It has been two years since we met last time when I went back to China.
: I have been missing my parents very much. I being the only child, my
: parents must be missing me even more.
: 两年都没见面了, 为啥不回国呢... 挖坑自跳的地方建议删除. -_-
: <<< My father is currently a xx, and the college doesn’t allow him to take
: a long vacation by Chinese New Year.
: ....既然在大学上班，寒假总是有的......所以不和你母亲一起赴美有点不合理。挖坑
| j**i
发帖数: 375 | 8 3000主要还是要想清楚之前2次为什么被拒，是运气不好？回答问题太紧张？还是有一
些硬伤？3000相较原来的2次被拒，最好是能有所改进。 | j**i
发帖数: 375 | 9
别写ideally就行
【在 G******8 的大作中提到】
: 你是指直接写月份,from November 12014 to February 2015? thank you
| G******8
发帖数: 41 | 10 请问这个父亲不能一起来原因应该怎么写好呢?
非常感谢你给的宝贵的意见.
take
【在 j**i 的大作中提到】
:
: 别写ideally就行
| G******8
发帖数: 41 | 11 恩,2000没房产证,现在办好了,还去东南亚旅游了一躺.
【在 j**i 的大作中提到】
: 3000主要还是要想清楚之前2次为什么被拒，是运气不好？回答问题太紧张？还是有一
: 些硬伤？3000相较原来的2次被拒，最好是能有所改进。
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